Wednesday 31 May 2017
THE ATTIC
THE ATTIC
The deep dark attic faces me again i have no choose but to go into treadle gazem of death
and jaws i hesitated but go in to unlock the dark secrets and questions that i want to now
i dread but i go in soft things whirl around me
my heart fills with fear i run down to my room
and never go back there again.
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A bit of editing is required please Jayden... Punctuation needs to be corrected before publishing.
ReplyDeleteA strong start with alliteration to help set the scene.